A Note About Writing

A Note About Writing

I was over at The Dumbest Blog Ever (which seems to me to be increasingly misnamed) and read a three-part western story he had written called Shooter and the Kid. He had based it on a twenty-five hundred year old Greek tragedy called Philoctetes by Sophocles. I recognized the name Sophocles from having worked at Borders Bookstore but otherwise I had no idea what the story was going to be about. I could have asked Der Google beforehand but I wanted to see how the story held up for itself. When I finished reading the story I did look it up and found a fairly clear and concise summary of the play here.

What I discovered was that he had impeccably captured the characters. It was almost shocking in a way. I mean, it was like he knew them and had just come back from having lunch with them. He took those old Geeks, Greeks and moved them over two thousand years into the future and they were still the same. Now granted, he does seem to be into all that mythology stuff and the Trojan War and Macedonia which is all Greek to me, but I don’t think that was it. I think it was the characters that I enjoyed meeting. And that is the note I want to leave with writers everywhere.

If you are writing for me as your audience, make your characters be real people. I can forgive a lot of things that writers do as long as the characters are real people. It could be a bug-eyed monster or a cowboy or a soldier, but make the person real. In my humble estimation all great books are about people. Even Bible stories are all about people. So, whether you are a long-term established author or have never even thought about writing until now, remember, I want to meet your non-marshmallow peeps.

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16 responses to “A Note About Writing”

  1.  Avatar
    Anonymous

    A more than worthwhile promotion for the three part Western.

  2. Macrine Jangu Avatar
    Macrine Jangu

    Ay ay captain!😁
    Anyway….this was very helpful
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    for me and for others…im sharing this real quick

  3. Brothers Campfire Avatar

    It was excellent!

  4. Lydia Avatar

    Cool.
    Not sure why he named his blog that.

    1. dumbestblogger Avatar

      It was the smartest thing I could think of.

      1. Herb Avatar

        I believe it!

      2. Lydia Avatar

        Ha! I love it then!

        1. dumbestblogger Avatar

          Good deal!

        2. Herb Avatar

          When it comes to being dumb he’s quite clever.

          1. Lydia Avatar

            So true.

    2. Herb Avatar

      Well, some of his stories are…er…well, you know.

  5. dumbestblogger Avatar

    Marshmallows are people too! Seriously appreciate the shout-out, and so glad you enjoyed it.

  6. wiangga Avatar

    very good writing indeed.

    non-marshmallow peeps..

    may i know whats d meaning of it..

    1. Herb Avatar

      Peeps are a popular candy here at Easter time and they’re made of marshmallows.

  7. John Liming Avatar

    The orange colored typeface on “Prudentia Sit” is almost invisible to my glaucoma and the krinkled background competes mightily with the ordinary typeface and makes the whole blog difficult to read. Other than that, excellent job as always.

    1. Herb Avatar

      Thanks for the feedback. Lately I’ve been seeing the WP reader being used so much that I forget there are people who come to the site. I enjoy putting with the different themes and settings and your input is valuable to me.

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